(#) Aquamarine9520 2012-12-10I love this story. I love the two plots that are entwining together and how you write with emotion. Well done cannot wait for the next chapter.
Author's responseAw, thank you so much! I really appreciate this review- and I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. I'll try to update soon. :)
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-01-03Ouch, Jon. That hurt me/, let alone Ryan. Let's just all stop being mean and you can go back to being a kinky bastard, yeah? XD (And I have a feeling that /a drink will turn into more than one, Ryan.... tsk Tsk tsk Someone needs to knock some sense into that guy. Although, I'm sure Mirazal will be only too happy to do that if she gets to spank him! XD Haha, ah, dear. But seriously.)
You've really got me interested in Juliet's backstory. For some stupid reason I keep thinking "RAPE VICTIM!!!" but I know that I am totally and most likely utterly wrong, right?
Anyway, since I'm so slow at reviewing, I'm off to read the next part because, hello, new chapter - yay!!
(Btw - if your alerts are stuffing up again - I uploaded a new chap of MTYK around Christmas. If you know and you've just been busy, that's okay, I totally understand. Just thought I'd let you know in case your alerts weren't working and to you know, stop the intense wait for more Loucer action. XD)
Author's responseYeah, yeah, yeah. One drink is never just one drink, and I couldn't help myself with that line. It sure does pack a punch. Even I cringed. Whoooaaaa lol, spanking Ryan? I missed something very very important, and kinky.
I'm even slower, obviously. Off to review yours!
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-01-06Well, she's obsessed with him, isn't she? Atleast, that's what I've managed to deduce from her reviews. ;) Ah, I dunno. I was in a weird mood when I wrote that line.
Author's responseShe is, haha. :P
Well, you put something awkwardly kinky in my mind lol. And now I'll just be forever thinking about spanking Ryan.
What the hell is wrong with me?
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