“I really need to kiss someone,” Frank sighed, flopping back down on Gerard’s bed. “Do you think Mikey would do it if we paid him?”
(#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2012-12-12 06:43:57 AMholy fucking shit that was so fucking good, OMGee I'm in love with this. wow wow wow wow. I could have read that all day. the way you described the kiss was detailed and original. if you don't become a professional author it would be a crime! don't you ever stop what you do! crap now i gotta decide what i'm going to rate this story...it was hot, original, exciting and EVERYTHING!!!! WOW!
Author's responseAw, thank you so much, you're lovely! I swear, reading this review just made my day :'D I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you so much for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it :)
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-12-12 02:07:47 PMLike all of the stories you write, this was fantastic! It was cute, funny and just plain adorable.
In other words, it was pure perfection. I can't wait for more of your writing! :P
Author's responseAw, thank you so much, you're lovely :'D Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
- Aw!! So cute. I liked Gerard in this. He was really cool and his nervousness was sweet and I just wanted to hug him or something. I was okay with Frank's character, but I almost think his personality in this would have been suited better to an older high schooler, but the haven't been kissed thing was more believable this way. I would almost like to see this story from Gerard's perspective, but I won't ask for that because I'd rather you continue on with your other stories. Thanks for posting cute-fluffiness, and I hope your exams ended up alright!!
Author's responseThank you! I kind of agree about Frank...But it was just a little oneshot I wrote for fun, I wasn't too bothered about being technically accurate, y'know? Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm so glad you liked it :'D
(#) xxMetalxFreak69 2012-12-13 04:18:19 PMofficially my favorite one-shot. it was so sweet, cute and realistic and just damn adorable. They were so shy and scared and it made it even better. Loved it. Keep it up girl!
Author's responseWow, seriously? Thank you so much, and thank you for taking the time to review :'D
(#) CoffeeAddictForLife 2012-12-14 10:51:12 AMCute beyond belief! Really love both of their characters in this, and the idea ha getting rid of your own writer's block? And damn get published soon; you're too good :)
Author's responseThank you very muchly, that made my day :'D
(#) PsychoticIsWhatsIn 2012-12-14 07:45:45 PMOne day I hope to obtain the ability to write like you holy shit. The way you can manipulate words to make a fictional scene sound so realistic is unbelievable. Just...I can't. I have lost the ability to can.
This was just so cute and rksjdhwjdbisndi. Gerard and Frank are just -sobs-
Author's responseOh man, thank you for such a lovely review :'D Made me smile so much! Glad you liked it :D