Not MCR related , but I had to write a poem for Language Arts. This poem is about my shadow. Here it is if anyone would like to read it:
- Dude, this is amazing. (It rhymed. Whoa. I am incapable of rhyming.)
I'll say that in the sentence where you said " Lets the weather change her" it seemed kind of awkwardly thrown in, so you might wanna smooth it out a little.
But otherwise it was great. :)