"I could tell that the news to come was not good; he was having a hard time to spit out whatever he wanted to tell me."
THE FATHERLY LOVE THING?
IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE
I really really loved this, and the little surprise there at the end. That should make for an interesting next chapter. Please update soon!
Author's responseAHH!! I'M SO GLAD. YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I was going to take the fatherly love thing out because I though it was unfitting or just too tacky but I'm so glad it makes sense xD Thank you!!!!
(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-12-25 07:28:04 PMFrom a moral standpoint, Gerard did the right thing, putting someone out of their suffering, especailly when that person is his own brother. As it stands, when your dog is suffering and sick, you have it put to sleep, so doing the same to humans isn't that much of a stretch.
And that last paragraph or two just added a whole new level of intense to this thing. I must have more!
Author's responseWow, that was a really good point! That's a great way to put it. Thank you!! :D