Dylan comes home to a surprise.
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-01-02 03:43:25 AM'Kinkfest.' /'... The kinky bastard.'/ I SEE A PATTERN DEVELOPING HERE!!! (I think I've started something else! :/) Jon Walker, we know your secret. ;D
(And on a repeated reading of the previous chapter, I was able to eliminate Little Mc Skinny-Fuck from the possible band members, so I knew it had to be either Brendon or Spence.)
I can't wait for her to meet the guys. That's gonna be such an interesting point to the story. And to see how Jon reacts to all of them there, with pictures and stories... I still wanna know how he died, you know. Maybe it will give me an insight into how to kill Ryan off in a fic I'm writing for my friend. (Despite the fact that it is entirely her plot, she neglected to mention that part.) And why he hasnt moved on to the afterlife (and upon reading that word repeatedly, I had the A7X song of the same name in my head. Which I didnt object to, because HELLO, Synyster Gates is a fucking amazing guitarist. (and quite good-looking too; I think I'm starting to understand your 'hot-tattooed-men' aesthetic. Especially if they're in bands. ;D) ).
Anyway. Dylan and Jon's relationship... I love all the various degrees and how they're progressing. Recently I read a fic where the main pairing were calling each other 'baby' by the start
(Little Mc Skinny-Fuck, lmfao. That is beautiful.)
I'm going to try my hardest to make it interesting, and not just completely stupid lol. His death isn't that interesting but... eh, hope you like it- as odd as that sounds. Is that fic posted?!? And Ryan dies?!?
Everytime I hear afterlife I think of FOB. Haha. (IT IS ABOUT TIME YOU GET IT! Seriously... yummy. They are just freakin' delicious looking.)
That is so weird, and awkward. Like, I could see having Jon call her baby in a rude or teasing way, which I might do haha. I've thought on and off about it but seriously? So awkward.
And thank you! I always LOVE your reviews!
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-01-02 03:47:13 AMARGH! My review didn't get all posted. :'(
Continued on: ... Of the second chapter, and they weren't even a couple. But yeah, good pace. Not too fast, not too slow - something that Jon Walker (kinky-bastard extraordinaire) makes sure of. ;)
So, this review is stupidly long, so to save you from boredom in reading my review/essay, I'm gonna end it here with a, "Love it! Can't wait for the next update! :3"
Author's responseWow. that would be awkward.
Yep, he's fast with his rude remarks but none of them are mushy romantic really, and he doesn't mean it... or I don't mean for him to mean it lol.
Thanks! I love your reviews for this. You're the only one who reads it, lol.
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-01-06 09:31:44 PMNo, the fic's not posted. I'm sort of wanting to finish it before I post it, but it's 30k and counting, so I might just make it my giant WIP and post when I have enough for a chapter. And yes, it's sort of kid!fic, but not. He's dead, but he has a 19 yr old daughter (that he didn't know about) who doesn't know about him and just happens to look like him... Yeah. Like I said, it isnt my plot. I'm trying to make it as less cliched as possible.
Aww, well then I'll just have to review more! Haha. XD
Author's responseThat's a good idea. I have a bunch of stuff typed up that I haven't posted yet. I wish I could get to a finishing point, but I suck at finishing stories. Endings are not my thing. I'm too abrupt, I think. I'm writing a Spencer fic at Atomickilljoys request though. I'm kind of really bad at requested fics though. X.x So it might be crap.
Hmm. That seems interesting, though odd. I probably wouldn't be able to write it, haha, but you could do well with it.
Yes! me too! :D