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Hey guys.
Please R&R my song fic?
Thanks

Standing over the bloodied double bed that he shared with Sadie,Gerard remembered every detail.

Late dawns and early sunsets
Just like my favourite scenes


They walk in the late sunset.
Young lovers.
Both aged 14.
Sitting under the old maple tree in her backyard.

Then holding hands and life was perfect.
Just like up on the screen.

Their love was just like you read in fairytales.
But,their fairytale was a reality.

And the whole time while always giving
Counting your face among the living.

Again,by the old maple tree.
Older,possibly,20 years old.
Her head on his chest.
Slow,steady heartbeats.
"Marry me"He whispered.
"Yes"She replied.

Up and down escalators
Pennies and colder fountains

Three months after the proposal.
In the park.
The wedding was set.
She walks down the stone cold aisle towards him.
All smiles.

Elevators and half price sales
Trapped in by all these mountains.

She reaches him,at the alter.
Still smiles.
The vows are said.
Sealed with a kiss.

Running away and hiding with you.
I never thought they'd get me here.

Three years after.
The pitter-patter of two pairs of tiny feet fill the halls.
Their children.
Both 2 years old.
Their family.
She never saw the evil that was brewing inside of him.

Not knowing you'd change from just one bite.
I fought them all off just to hold you
Close and tight.

He was changing.
He was drunk.
A druggie.
Soon to be a cold hard killer.

But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
And if I had the guts
To put this to your head.

He was drunk.
He never mean't it.
He never saw the pain.
Those scared eyes mean't nothing to him,he had said.
But they did.

But would anything matter
If you're already dead?
And well should I be shocked now,
By the last thing you said?

He held the gun towards her chest.
Her heart.
Her eyes widened.
He pulled the trigger.

But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
And if I had the guts
To put this to your head?

He heard the tiny voices whisper his name.
Daddy.
He turned to them.
Saw the tears stream down their faces.
But he shot them.
The evil had taken over.

And now should I be shocked now
By the last thing you said?
Before I pull this trigger
Your eyes vacant and stained.

He began to regret.
He hated what he had done.
He didn't like this life.
He wanted his family back.
His life back.

And in saying you loved me
Made things harder at best
And these words changing nothing
As your body remains.

He placed the bodys in his room.
He looked at them.
Three bodies.
His family.
The tears streamed down his face.
His tears.
His face.

And there's no room in this hell.
There's no room in the next.
And our memories defeat us.
And I'll end this direst.

He was going to hell.
He was going to die.
He'd end this life.
He'd end his life.

But does anyone notice?
But does anyone care?
And if I had the guts now
To put this to your head?

He laid in that bed.
With his family.
He raised the gun to his head.
He shut his eyes.

But does anything matter
If you're already dead?
and should I be shocked now
By the last thing you said?
Before I pull this trigger
Your eyes vacant and stained.
And in saying you loved me
Made things harder at best.
And these words changing nothing
As your body remains.
And there's no room in this hell
There's no room in the next.
But does anyone notice
There's a corpse in this bed?

He pulled the trigger.
He died.

Is it ok?
It probably does'nt fit the lyrics..
Still..
R&R?