The second chapter in the Strike Wizard saga
(#) Genericrandom5 2013-01-27 04:37:37 PMThe concept for this is strangely entertaining, but you need to work on quite a bit more at making your writing flow. So far, it usually feels more like you're relating facts and the story has yet to draw me in. I am, however, very curious to see how you'll work the two systems of magic together. Looks promising.