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The House of Bishop
2 ReviewsThe second chapter in the Strike Wizard saga
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Strike Wizard
(#) Genericrandom5 2013-01-27 04:37:37 PM
The concept for this is strangely entertaining, but you need to work on quite a bit more at making your writing flow. So far, it usually feels more like you're relating facts and the story has yet to draw me in. I am, however, very curious to see how you'll work the two systems of magic together. Looks promising. -
Strike Wizard
(#) SecretlyInSlytherin7 2013-02-10 05:47:42 PM
I like it so far, it's different from anything I've read so far.
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