You might as well have been dead, the way your eyes no longer lit up anymore.
That was really fantastic.
Surprising that it was so short and held such depth. It was like you caught the moment and put magic words into it.
Which is awesome.
This was so beautiful, dear god.
Very poignant and touching. You captured so much emotion and so much beauty in such a short piece. I wish it had been longer.
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