CRITICS! Calling all critics. Please be extremely critical of my story. It's for a class, so, help me? I'm drowning in my hopeless words!
This is beautiful. Don't fix it, I don't think it needs to be fixed.
Author's responseOh, hai M!
Thanks lots, but I think it does even though I just revised it. There's a chapter update if you want to read.
But, it lacks depth! Where is my depth...I have no clue what I'm writing about anymore. Ugh, I'm just sick of being tired and tired of being so sick.
:P Nighty, night, dude!
(#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-02-03 07:33:42 PMI WILL CRITIC YOU TOMORROW!
There's an updated version, sooooooooooo...
That was supposed to go somewhere...
ANYHOW. Thank you thank you! You wrote that Sue and You thing, right? That was awesome.
I'm so happy you'll be critiquing me. :D