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Chimerical Merry-Go-Round

CRITICS! Calling all critics. Please be extremely critical of my story. It's for a class, so, help me? I'm drowning in my hopeless words!

Category: Drama - Rating: G - Genres: Drama,Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2013/02/03 - Updated: 2013/02/04 - 452 words

Reviews

• Chimerical Merry-Go-Round

  (#) Mirazal 2013-02-03 05:55:31 PM

  Duuuuuuude.
  
  This is beautiful. Don't fix it, I don't think it needs to be fixed.

  Author's response

  Oh, hai M!
  
  Thanks lots, but I think it does even though I just revised it. There's a chapter update if you want to read.
  
  But, it lacks depth! Where is my depth...I have no clue what I'm writing about anymore. Ugh, I'm just sick of being tired and tired of being so sick.
  
  :P Nighty, night, dude!

• Chimerical Merry-Go-Round

  (#) CarcinoGeneticist 2013-02-03 07:33:42 PM

  I WILL CRITIC YOU TOMORROW!

  Author's response

  SWEETNESS!
  
  There's an updated version, sooooooooooo...
  
  That was supposed to go somewhere...
  
  ANYHOW. Thank you thank you! You wrote that Sue and You thing, right? That was awesome.
  
  I'm so happy you'll be critiquing me. :D

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