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Target: Karin
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) pokemaster12 2013-02-17
Another good chapter. The way you add Karin is interesting. One of the things I've always found odd about adding a girl like her is how you make it happen despite her obsession with Sasuke.Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-02-17
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading your latest chapter and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.Eroninja
(#) DeathTitan 2013-08-13
Still loving the past conquests getting some screen time, here's hoping that never changes.
Nice to see the Sakura interactions, I find it to be almost as interesting to watch as the Naruto and Ino moments. Feels like I am sometimes reading canon at certain points, though not a total repeat of what happened per say. I especially liked the Manda scene, bringing out more of a focus that Sasuke might not be able to be 'saved' before the confrontation with his brother.
Not sure how Sasuke will be redeemed once he learns about the situation from Tobi, since most like to equate that to when he gets the curse mark. Where he just develops into less of a character, more angst and blind to anything but the easy path to hatred. Makes it hard to see the appeal to seeing Sasuke return to the Leaf village, since he's likely either going to be labeled a criminal when he doesn't return from the Itachi confrontation and works with Tobi, the one who had several fingers in the pies that make up the elemental nations to spike things into motion including the Uchiha's coup.
Even if he did return, he'd still be put in prison or have his chakra bound which I can't imagine him willing to endure from his pride and self-righteous behavior he seems to give off nowadays. Sometimes it really makes me glad he doesn't return after the fight, because I'd be disgusted reading him being hailed a 'hero' to the village and given a slap on the wrist despite his traitorous actions.
Bah, I'm not surprised that you went that route with Karin. Got to deal with her obsession with Sasuke somehow, and that's not unreasonable for someone to picture him putting her under a Genjutsu. He did it to Manda with little care or regard, and he doesn't have much feelings for her like he may for Sakura.
Looking forward to where Karin gets placed in the scheme of things, and I am curious to see if you'll ever address the matter of her being an Uzumaki relation with Naruto.
Reviewing and reading onwards, Titan.Eroninja
(#) xxconfusionxsucksxx 2015-01-06
Just got reading this again..because well i have a lot of time in me..and reading your story is one of my hobby to fill them..just got me thinking,and question would it be nice to have Itachi again for your future chapter..ressurrect him or something..i just felt that he can help Naruto with his ambtion for the peace and unity he wants..hehe... just saying..Eroninja
(#) Daniel2610994 2017-11-15
Well shit, it must suck to realize the memory you cherised the most was a vile lie, but thankfully now karin has someone that can actually care for her :3Eroninja
(#) Maincourse 2019-10-16
I have returned for another article of context in my endeavors of commenting and this has got me thinking of multiple ideas. One is that once Naruto had removed his Kyuubi from him most of his latent abilities would be snuffed out since he had usually had extra help from being overwhelmed, but now having to only rely on his own chakra makes me believe that he won't be able to get any far without having to remove the seal from his body and taking in all the chakra that the tails has inside, though not being able to produce much since he is only carrying 5 at this moment. Another being that his Kyuubi is most likely going to have to return because this can cause major distress for them as Naruto will seem to be all that well will slowly weaken overtime until he has been restored, another being which is the Kyuubi made sure that his offspring laid dormant and now that she is no longer with him will they suddenly become active and possibly produce on accident. just some of the many ideas filling my mind. As the last was hoping he was bound to get caught for sheer comedic effect while the same time not. Again keep up the good work you are producing
Sincerely, MCEroninja
(#) milessmith1111 2022-07-13
Wow, some interesting things happen in this chapter. First, Naruto meats his father and basically saying I doing things my way by freeing Kurama and then her body husband tries to kill her. I expected a negative reaction but not that severe. Make you wonder how the rest of the family will react. They will probably try to kill her again. I also enjoy the small moment Naruto had with Manda showing how far Sasuke Has Fallen. In addition, I very much enjoyed how Naruto got Karin. She is about to get all the love and attention that she deserves from her tragic past. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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