About Anne when Gilbert goes away,
- I do mind your spelling, and your improper use of words. Since when is hair anemic? Have you never heard of Spellchecker? You can find one on the internet very easily.
The story concept is an interesting one, but is spoiled by your spelling, punctuation and other mechanical errors. Get a beta, if you don't want to use spellchecker, and improve.
Author's responseI have never been a great speller so I am sorry if I made you upset....I know, my spelling is really bad!! I am improving and well the other stuff...hum, i will work. maybe