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Dear mummy

Mummy....Mummy please stop...You're killing your self...

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/11 - Updated: 2013/03/11 - 98 words - Complete

Reviews

• Dear mummy

  (#) MCR-99 2013-03-11 05:36:39 PM

  ;~; this is just...really good.
  
  SO SAD.
  
  I know the feeling,when someone smokes.
  
  My mum,stepdad and 16 year old brother smoke...
  
  I'd make them stop,but I can't....

  Author's response

  Thank you hugs
  
  It really is.
  
  My mum smokes :( I always and still do hate it.
  
  I tried to tell her...

• Dear mummy

  (#) AlexisSCREAM 2013-03-11 05:39:57 PM

  This is amazing. I also know the feeling.
  
  xoxo

  Author's response

  It sucks :(

• Dear mummy

  (#) Poppana 2013-03-11 06:55:00 PM

  Really sad, I almost had water leaking out of my eyeholes.
  Smoking is a horrible thing, I don't like it when people do it. I've liked the smell of cigarettes since I was very young, though. No one in my family smokes, but my boyfriend did and I can't tell you how many times I tried to make him quit. It just doesn't make sense to me why people start smoking.

  Author's response

  I wish I could make my mum stop which was the idea in this. But I wanted to give it that slight feeling of innocence so I wrote it like how I thought of it as a kid.
  
  Thank you ^^

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