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Dear mummy

by 9BladedMiradai 3 Reviews

Mummy....Mummy please stop...You're killing your self...

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/11 - Updated: 2013/03/11 - 98 words - Complete


  • Dear mummy

    (#) MCR-99 2013-03-11 05:36:39 PM

    ;~; this is just...really good.

    SO SAD.

    I know the feeling,when someone smokes.

    My mum,stepdad and 16 year old brother smoke...

    I'd make them stop,but I can't....

    Author's response

    Thank you hugs

    It really is.

    My mum smokes :( I always and still do hate it.

    I tried to tell her...
  • Dear mummy

    (#) AlexisSCREAM 2013-03-11 05:39:57 PM

    This is amazing. I also know the feeling.


    Author's response

    It sucks :(
  • Dear mummy

    (#) Poppana 2013-03-11 06:55:00 PM

    Really sad, I almost had water leaking out of my eyeholes.
    Smoking is a horrible thing, I don't like it when people do it. I've liked the smell of cigarettes since I was very young, though. No one in my family smokes, but my boyfriend did and I can't tell you how many times I tried to make him quit. It just doesn't make sense to me why people start smoking.

    Author's response

    I wish I could make my mum stop which was the idea in this. But I wanted to give it that slight feeling of innocence so I wrote it like how I thought of it as a kid.

    Thank you ^^

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