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Our Lips Touch (OLT) 2.0 experiment

by NotKissingYouGoodBye 2 Reviews

it's basically a rewrite of 'Our lips touch' it's an experiment so i really need you (the reader) to review and tell me which was better. the original or remake?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2013/03/07 - Updated: 2013/03/11 - 1794 words


  • Our Lips Touch (OLT) 2.0 experiment

    (#) MisfitsAdict 2013-03-07 09:06:25 AM

    It's good, I like it, although I'm not quite sure why you needed to re write this. Are you re writing the whole thing or?

    But nonetheless it's good, and you should definitely keep writing! x

    Author's response

    Yeah im going to rewrite the whole thing. Im doing it because i hit a brick wall in the original story and i wanted to fix up the chapters before i wrote new stuff.

    Thank you for the comment it means a lot to me :)
  • Our Lips Touch (OLT) 2.0 experiment

    (#) jessloui 2013-03-08 07:47:11 AM

    I love it!
    I really loved the old one as well of course, and I was sad when you hit a metaphorical brick wall, but I'm glad you decided to bring it back. Excited to see where you take this new version :)

    Author's response

    yay thank jessloui it means a lot to me :) the next update should be soon. this one is going to be a lot like the old one just with a few different thing other here and there. my aim is to make it a better read and to do that I need reviews and comments :) thank you for the comment

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