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The Words of Pain and Hurt That Ache

by AlexisSCREAM 1 Reviews

Patched up with weakened tape.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/16 - Updated: 2013/04/05 - 158 words - Complete


  • The Words of Pain and Hurt That Ache

    (#) 9BladedMiradai 2013-03-17 12:59:17 AM

    The use of repetition is good but a little excessive in places :) I like the general theme and idea though ^^

    Author's response

    The excessive repetition was actually intentional. It's supposed to represent it being the only real focus. But thanks.

    (Actually, it's because I'm tired and in pain and too lazy to actually think, but I wanted to post xD)


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