Categories > Original > Humor > Diary Of A Teenage Fangirl.

*facepalms*

by MCR-99 4 Reviews

Just made this 100 times worse..

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2013/05/08 - Updated: 2013/05/08 - 159 words

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  • Diary Of A Teenage Fangirl.

    (#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-05-08 03:23:59 PM

    You can put in one of my OCs instead of Mia is you like? I like the story but I don't want you to have to upset Mia again so you can change the name to Missy.

    Author's response

    Wait a second.
    I'm keeping Mia in, just tell her I was refering to one of the kids at my school, also named Mia.

    PROBLEMO SOLVED-O.

    I will update now okay
  • Diary Of A Teenage Fangirl.

    (#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-05-08 03:52:54 PM

    Isn't that kind of dishonest though? You've already told her that you put her in so she could be with Kellin? I don't think you should lie to her like that Sadie, she's one of your best friends.
  • Diary Of A Teenage Fangirl.

    (#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-05-08 03:54:30 PM

    Also you said in the story that her nickname is Kitty so it's quite clear who you meant by it.

    Author's response

    Damn.. hold on let me edit.
    and, telling a small white lie every now and then doesn't really hurt..

    fine okay I'll change the name of Mia..
  • Diary Of A Teenage Fangirl.

    (#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-05-08 04:36:54 PM

    In this case it would hurt her though.

    One: Mia's not stupid, she can figure out easily that it was her in the fic.

    Two: You already apologised to her and said that you just wanted to put her with Kellin.

    Three: You don't even tell a "small white lie" to your best friends. Because you should be close enough to them not to lie ever.

    Author's response

    I fixed the problem okay. I have gone through every chapter and changed Mia's name to Destiny, an OC I have made up within ten seconds, and I got rid of her nickname and called Destiny 'Des'.
    I have changed the appearance too. Don't get me wrong, Mia will still be in this fic, but as like my adopted sister or something, or one of the kids from another school who I meet at the party that'll be the big plot twist. So, I hope that's kinda fixed the problem just that tiny bit..

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