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Chapter five

by XxlovefrankieroxX 3 Reviews

Jamia and Bob get caught in an awkward situation and Gerard is starting to grow suspicious about Frank.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2013/05/13 - Updated: 2013/05/13 - 6130 words

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  • Feels like drowning

    (#) sagazi 2013-05-13 09:50:15 PM

    Oh gosh another lovely chapter!!
    I feel so bad for Jamia and Bob because they don't have someone like Gerard to take care of them. And really... I had such a hard time trying not to laugh when Gerard thought frank was an alien. But yeah I shouldn't laugh! I've imagined stuff like that myself... Just not with the kinky sex haha.

    Btw you're making my whole life with all your compliments ;u; seriously you don't know how glad I am that you like the drawing! Thank you Rachel!

    Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter

    xø Liva

    Author's response

    Haha who hasn't imagined what aliens would be like. I sure wouldn't complain if they turned up looking like Frank XD
    And thank YOU for drawing it, every compliment is truly deserved I can't even tell you how much I love it! :D
    xo
  • Feels like drowning

    (#) FlyingSmoke 2013-05-15 02:37:48 AM

    kinky alien sex.
    That is all.
    (I liked it, and I'm liking this thing do far. I don't know if I've reviewed yet on other chapters but I like this one, how it mixes the innocent with the luuuuuv and the mistery [oh english...]. While yes, Bob and Jamia are screwed, I don't care, since they're whatever, trying to bring Frank back to the Colony or some shit like that. And then Gerard's epiphany... Oh my god, that man is crazy. After seeing Frank enjoying water, getting used to legs, and knowing a lot about mermaids you would think he would go 'oh, Frank must be a merman' but no. Aliens.
    Thank you, Based Gerard.
    Update soon, Ray :) )

    Author's response

    Haha yes Gerard is obviously not the smartest man in the world ;) But I'm sure he'll figure out that Frank isn't an alien soon enough XD
    I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for taking the time to review :D
    xo
  • Feels like drowning

    (#) fire_girl96 2013-05-23 04:26:49 PM

    Can't wait for the next chapter, always loved your stories!!

    Author's response

    Why thank you :)
    xo

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