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Grey.

by AmericanHorrorStory 4 Reviews

This city sucks. || Majorly inspired by Pete Wentz's 'Gray'. R&R? Note inside.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/06/22 - Updated: 2013/06/29 - 667 words

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  • Grey.

    (#) DropAHeart 2013-06-22 12:29:24 PM

    This is fucking brilliant.

    Author's response

    I just wrote stuff about Dubai. I love it there, I hate it there. I have a love-hate relationship with that city. Also, the bit about the cigarette is true. I smoke. There's something grotesquely relaxing about it. My mind is full of psychobabble bullshit right now.
  • Grey.

    (#) atomickilljoy 2013-06-22 12:44:20 PM

    Holy shit.
    This is fucking inspiring.
    Publishers are always getting mediocrity from people with no passion when there's perfect fucking work on a site for angry kids with a reason.
    This is fucking insane, man. Brilliant.

    Author's response

    I wrote this all on a two hour car trip. Blame Pete Wentz. I'm lost in a world of metaphors and grey cities and hopeless eyes right now. I could write a motherfucking book.
  • Grey.

    (#) SyraStrange 2013-06-25 07:00:00 AM

    Guh.

    -S
  • Grey.

    (#) Poppana 2013-07-03 04:56:54 PM

    This is really cool. I absolutely love your wording. Something about this makes me feel sort of uncomfortable and sad (in a good way, I swear), but you managed to get an emotional reaction and that's always good. Overall, I think this is brilliantly written and I hope you win that poetry contest.

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