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This city sucks. || Majorly inspired by Pete Wentz's 'Gray'. R&R? Note inside.
(#) DropAHeart 2013-06-22 12:29:24 PMThis is fucking brilliant.
Author's responseI just wrote stuff about Dubai. I love it there, I hate it there. I have a love-hate relationship with that city. Also, the bit about the cigarette is true. I smoke. There's something grotesquely relaxing about it. My mind is full of psychobabble bullshit right now.
(#) atomickilljoy 2013-06-22 12:44:20 PMHoly shit.
This is fucking inspiring.
Publishers are always getting mediocrity from people with no passion when there's perfect fucking work on a site for angry kids with a reason.
This is fucking insane, man. Brilliant.
Author's responseI wrote this all on a two hour car trip. Blame Pete Wentz. I'm lost in a world of metaphors and grey cities and hopeless eyes right now. I could write a motherfucking book.
- This is really cool. I absolutely love your wording. Something about this makes me feel sort of uncomfortable and sad (in a good way, I swear), but you managed to get an emotional reaction and that's always good. Overall, I think this is brilliantly written and I hope you win that poetry contest.