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This City

by atomickilljoy 4 Reviews

Just another restless night.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/07/03 - Updated: 2013/07/03 - 220 words


  • This City

    (#) Poppana 2013-07-03 05:12:11 PM

    Oh wow. I dig this so much. You have a really, hmm, how should I say it, eloquent (??) way of expressing yourself :D If that makes sense??
    I just thought this was written beautifully and I love that it's not so out there and obvious or straightforward... Please note, I'm absolutely rubbish when it comes to poetry so I'm probably not the right person to be reviewing poetry, however, I did like this. Good job.

    Author's response

    Haha, I think just about anyone can give poetic feedback
    I loved yours and I bet you're fantastic at poetry
    It doesn't take a genius to wrote what is felt
    Thank you
  • This City

    (#) lolhai 2013-07-03 06:36:20 PM

    Nice. Very nice.

    Author's response

    Thank you, very much c:
  • This City

    (#) DropAHeart 2013-07-03 07:19:48 PM

    Holy smokes!
    This is really great.
    Why are you so talented?

    Author's response

    Haha, thank you, I'm glad you liked it
  • This City

    (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-07-04 04:18:18 AM

    Holy smokes. I dig it, I dig it. I love it.

    Author's response

    I'm glad you dig it
    Thank you c:

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