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Little Rag Doll With The Pin-Pricked Eyes

by MCR-99 2 Reviews

Hung by the hand, tears in it's eyes, was the little rag doll with the pin-pricked eyes.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2013/07/26 - Updated: 2013/07/26 - 173 words


  • Little Rag Doll With The Pin-Pricked Eyes

    (#) Death_Herself 2013-07-26 03:59:28 PM

    If you get the right tune in your head this will sound like a fucked up nursery rhyme.

    Author's response


    Awwww thanks Jazzy
  • Little Rag Doll With The Pin-Pricked Eyes

    (#) intoyouricyblues 2013-07-27 03:55:12 AM

    Ari hung herself with my dad'sgoust belt. Same one he used to whip her with.

    Author's response

    I know, and I'm so sorry. That's kind of what inspired this, well, the whole effect of child abuse and how much I fucking loathe it. And, in this case, the little rag doll is, well, us. All of us here at FicWad, because we know in our hearts that Ari loved us.

    Sorry if this caused any harm to you, by the way. I just really, really want people to know how badly child abuse can affect most people. I wasn't abused of course, but I've seen the way it's affected them.

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