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A kind of rant, in the style of a poem.
Keep it to yourself, they say.
It's just a story, they say.
You don't have to read it, they say.
She can do it if she wants, they say.
Well, I say.
Ever heard of a state of opinion?
Ever heard of the right to say what you want?
Didn't you see I said 'No offence or anything'?
I wasn't being mean.
All I gave was constuctive critisism,
improvement points, as I like to say,
to broaden a writing style, make things better,
yet people just never saw it.
Wow, you guys are all against me now, huh?
Well, not like it's new for me, it's happened before.
When did this place get all pushy, like a fucking popularity thing?
I used to love it here, it's a place I feel welcome.
I'm not gonna rant, or go on some shitstorm,
I'm just gonna say one thing.
I was being as kind as I can,
and giving a state of opinion.
A/N: So, basically, this is a rant in the style of a poem. I wasn't being mean, I was just saying, slow down with the self-inserts and the depressive suicide motive, because it gets cliche. People really need to realise that you can't write the same thing over and over, I don't do that anymore. Hate me if you wish, just know I have the right to say whatever the fuck I want. But, fuck me, I'm on a period and really fucking grumpy.