- Hi! So interesting update. I would love a full written out encounter of just Em and her mum but I don't know whether you should cause it could end up getting pretty awkward and/or violent. I like how accepting Donna is, she's lovely. It was funny and well written as usual and I really liked it. Other than that, it was a fairly uneventful chapter and not much seemed to happen. I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. I'm also upto date with your story Affection and Genocide which I will review on there. I really love that story too and must compliment you on your versitality and ability to portray different characters in different stories.
Author's responseI was planning on making the next chapter eventful, but damn - I suck at action! I just can't seem to make things short, you know.. I wish I would learn that. I end up writing 24 long chapters that pretty much hold the events that could fit in two.
I'm kind of at a very low self-esteem/write's block point right now hahah.. Sometimes I wish I could hand the story over to someone more capable of writing it, and tell her all the twists and turns that I had in mind, leaving it to her to actually put in on paper. Or Microsoft Word, more likely.
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