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A Different Sort of Bond
(#) PhDMatt 2013-09-06
Nice chapter and good to see you're producing on this story. One of the things that you may wish to do at some point is to go back to earlier chapters and more clearly state when Harry and Daphne moved from uncomfortably bound to, particularly, boyfriend/girlfriend as you seem to have them over the last few chapters.
Thanks as always for your hard work on this story, looking forward to future installments.Author's response
It was in Chapter Seven that Harry first asked her out. They've been a couple since then more or less.
Thank you for commenting! I will see if I can make that transition stand out more.A Different Sort of Bond
(#) Cateagle 2013-09-06
A fun chapter as Harry's rep gets burnished a bit more. I daresay that having all those folk visit should generate some very interesting and colorful reactions among some (particularly if certain parties wonder why certain others aren't with them).Author's response
I'm glad you are enjoying it and thank you for the comment!A Different Sort of Bond
(#) pmpermex 2013-09-13
I just found this site a couple of days ago. This story is very interesting. A bit fast the relationship between Harry and Daphne, like they wanted each other badly since long time, and thought he is a bit bold he is still shy.Author's response
Thank you for commenting!A Different Sort of Bond
(#) stag 2013-09-13
awesome work keep goingAuthor's response
Thank you! I will. :)A Different Sort of Bond
(#) firelord 2013-09-16
thank you for sharing this fantastic story please continue to update as life allowsAuthor's response
Thank you for commenting and I will!
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