This story is about Harry Potter and his twin sister Brenda. It is mostly Brenda's story. There is a lot of Severus Snape in this story.
(#) COLD1 2013-10-09
Can someone say "Self-Insert"?
And get a beta, your writing is clunky and stiff, there are plenty of spelling and grammar errors, and overall, this is something we've ALL seen at some point.
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