A competition arises for the lead part between Jay and Archie, meanwhile Theresa convinces Atlanta into trying out for Juliet, unknowingly diminishing her own chances at the lead part
(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-08-06 01:51:07 PM
ooh, i can't wait for the next chapter, now THAT is gonna be interesting, good job
This is a really good story. I can't wait to find out what happens next. keep up the good work
(#) TORCH 2006-08-06 03:13:52 PM
What a twist! You should have Archie and Theresa as understudies so they could try to get the others out of the play so they could get the lead. Its just a suggestion though.
(#) Amanda!!! 2006-08-06 03:45:53 PM
wow great chappy!!! u shouls make theresa get really jelious when she sees jay kiss atlanta in the play and you should make archie get all mad... o' i just luv it cause its such a good twist!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
no offence to anyone, but i already have most of the story laid out in my head, and, although your suggestions are great, i don't etirly need them, and some of you are giving suggestions that where planned in the original story and kinda giving it away for other people, thanks for getting so into the story though
Dorry allow me to reprase that, suggestions about my writing as a whole is encuraged, just this specific story has picked the intrest of alot of people, encureging messages are cool to
(#) princessofoyownworld.. really have to log in 2006-08-07 08:53:42 PM
very good. i likes it! i sense drama.
(#) dana 2006-08-10 07:21:39 AM
that was not right!i mean not the writting,the jay and atlanta part!