Categories > Cartoons > Class of the Titans > A New Twist
Chapter the Second
14 ReviewsWhen quick tempers reach their peak, is pain the only way left to communicate?
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(#) iheartyou07 2006-08-06 07:24:19 PM
LOVE IT!!! god, I was on the edge of my seat, laughing at the fact that they were actually fighting! PLEASE, update soon(cough tomorrow cough). you're too good of a writer and you've got too good of a story here for me to let you procrastinate! hehe:P -
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(#) Mary-Lane 2006-08-06 08:16:13 PM
Ouch, poor Archie. x.x Excellent chapter, though. =) -
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(#) Gen 2006-08-06 08:47:49 PM
I really love the idea of pairing A/T together.
Cool fight scene!
Please continue Soon!!!!! -
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(#) Randog 2006-08-06 11:11:59 PM
wow. that was really really good. poor theresa. can't wait for the next chap- i bet it's gonna be great -
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(#) Loretta 2006-08-07 07:41:24 AM
This was a good chapter. Could you update 'Mind Games'? Oh, and this one too, but not in one day. It would be too much for you to do. -
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(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-08-07 08:13:36 AM
whoa... that was... whoa... i'm speechless... it was excelent... whoa
please update this and mind games soon -
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(#) princessofoyownworld, to lazy to log in 2006-08-07 08:49:14 PM
That was amazing! you have to update soon! Its just perfect!!! I'm begging you update soon!!! Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please
update soon! Pathetic as it im beging you! scolds self for begging, repetivaly and harsly -
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(#) StinkFace 2006-08-11 01:15:00 PM
I do love this story. I mean come on! How UNPERFECT is their relationship. I have two things to say though. One is of opinion and that is I am not a big fan of swearing in literature. Also, Drama Queen was used a few too many times. Maybe you should think of another way of saying it like melodramamtic and so on. I know you are making a play on one of Archies line from an eye for an eye, but it's just a suggestion.