(#) insanecousinbenji 2013-11-10You've outdone yourself once again, it flows so beautifully and you really manage to capture Frank's thoughts and emotions in your writing.The part with the apple in the box kind of reminds me of Pandora's box and the bible story with the garden of Eden and it's all very interesting, the only mistakes I noticed were how beginning and story were spelt in the author's note :) it's very good and you should be proud of yourself, I look forward to your next update!
Author's responseHaha I see the mistake, apologies xD haha your deductions impress, I'm glad to know you're paying attention because that's basically what I had in mind when i wrote that part, I am very into myths and stories from the bible (all though I'm not religious or practically enjoy religion) the story is basically gonna have a lot of mythological refrences. I also have a major obsessions with boxes xD
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