Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > Apples:Prologue:

Chapter five: Whisper

by Frerardpervert 5 Reviews

I was expecting something grand but it was just an apple.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Published: 2013/11/09 - Updated: 2013/11/09 - 1818 words

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  • Apples:Prologue:

    (#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2013-11-09 02:36:01 AM

    i really like this story

    Author's response

    I am really glad c:
  • Apples:Prologue:

    (#) CyanideCola 2013-11-09 11:13:38 AM

    awwwwwwwwwww i live the way they both interact in this fic and the last bit about le apple was adorable especially the last line
    Update soon
    Jade xø

    Author's response

    Merci boku :3 very much appreciated
  • Apples:Prologue:

    (#) teetl9 2013-11-09 09:07:16 PM

    I love your writing style and your way with words. I can't wait to see how the story progresses and I love the apple bit.
    Update soon! xø Chels

    Author's response

    Thank you very much. I do like satisfying you guys c: your appreciation means a lot to me.
  • Apples:Prologue:

    (#) zelda22314 2013-11-09 10:23:29 PM

    Really like this interested to see where it goes...

    Author's response

    Thank you. Hopefully I can keep you attached to it until the real action starts.
  • Apples:Prologue:

    (#) insanecousinbenji 2013-11-10 01:09:14 AM

    You've outdone yourself once again, it flows so beautifully and you really manage to capture Frank's thoughts and emotions in your writing.The part with the apple in the box kind of reminds me of Pandora's box and the bible story with the garden of Eden and it's all very interesting, the only mistakes I noticed were how beginning and story were spelt in the author's note :) it's very good and you should be proud of yourself, I look forward to your next update!

    Author's response

    Haha I see the mistake, apologies xD haha your deductions impress, I'm glad to know you're paying attention because that's basically what I had in mind when i wrote that part, I am very into myths and stories from the bible (all though I'm not religious or practically enjoy religion) the story is basically gonna have a lot of mythological refrences. I also have a major obsessions with boxes xD
    Thank you for your wonderful supporting reviews c:

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