- As usual, I can't wait to see what comes next.
Regulus now has three months to learn how to be an efficient barman so he can take over easily. It will make it easier to believe (I just couldn't see Regulus becoming a barman without any prior experience).
I like the way you're not rushing your story, contrarly to so many others out there. You take you time to lay strong bases and it adds a touch of realism rather than starting the "real" action at once. Yet, you still manage to make it so we're intrigued by new elements (aka Lorraine) but not overly so.
Well done :)
Author's responseThank you! Just as a warning, it might be a few days before the next chapter is up; it might be somewhat longer than my previous ones XD And thank you for the kind words. If this makes any sense; I'm trying to make some of the scenes in 1979-80 sound a bit like montages (where needed of course :)) because this isn't the present day, that's 1992; which we're not quite at yet XD if that makes any sense
Also, any ideas as to how I can flesh out Regulus and Lorraine's relationship in upcoming scenes? I just need a little help with that, and if you have any ideas, that'd be great!! :D
I also hope you'll continue to keep following the story's progress, regardless of any future delays that may happen :)
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