Categories > Books > Harry Potter > A Thousand Hours

Letters and Lies

by Topazvixen1981 3 Reviews

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/11/21 - Updated: 2013/11/21 - 2677 words

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  • A Thousand Hours

    (#) hpstrmlnr 2013-11-21 12:12:23 PM

    Hey!

    You should add a few lines where Regulus wonders if his son is a Squib before than he gets his Hogwarts letter since he never actually saw him perform any accidental magic.

    Wouldn't a Hogwarts professor come to explain magic if they believed Reggie to be a muggleborn?

    I think Regulus could have sent a message to Reggie through his Patronus to prove him that magic exists.

    I think Regulus could go into the Alley without being recognised if he dresses as a typical muggle. After all, he was not such a well known person before he disappeared, and everybody believes him dead, so no one would be looking for him particuliary. And you could make it so when he learns of Sirius' escape he would realize that his own brother would recognize him, even after all that time (brother bond, you know). It's up to you wether Sirius is the one to recognise him or not.

    Have fun writing Reggie's and Lorraine's discovery of the wizarding world!

    HpStRMlnR
  • A Thousand Hours

    (#) Topazvixen1981 2013-11-21 12:16:57 PM

    Thank you for the review- And yes, Reggie was put down as a Muggleborn, though I was going to have the messenger they sent to explain the news to his parents show up in the next chapter. I hope that makes sense! And yeah, I should have thought of that about the Patronus XD sorry!

    Author's response

    Excuse the fact that I put this as a review XP if only Ficwad had the 'respond to review' button right there on the new review
  • A Thousand Hours

    (#) hpstrmlnr 2013-11-21 01:48:42 PM

    Yeah I guess it makes sense that the professor would come only once to explain some more and take the young muggleborn in Diagon Alley. Thanks for clearing that up :)

    HpStRMlnR

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