(#) insanecousinbenji 2014-01-04I'm really bad at making decisions and try to avoid it if possible and this is a hard one because on one hand I like the idea of Frank's mom (although saying I like the idea of someone's mom sounds a bit weird) but I also like the idea of a Frank and Gerard kiss ... but then they'd be apart which would be bad because aw strain on their friendship, but also
pretty good because they'd be apart and Frank's confused little head but then again poor Frank... So yeah, a long comment with no real answer, I'm happy whatever happens.
Also I can't help noticing a few minor spelling/grammar mistakes in the chapters that so maybe you could get a beta to read through for you or something, I feel kind of mean pointing things out but I could do that if you'd like?
Author's responseNah it's your job as an audience to point out any mistakes to strengthen your auhtor, most of the time Im drunk while I write these so I get lazy reading them over and over xD so any mistakes made are due to my laziness. I shall fix them because I really do hate grammar mistakes and such. I think it's quiet clear what you want.
I also have no idea what a beta is besides the actual definition..
(#) insanecousinbenji 2014-01-04I think it just means like proofreader person who fixes things, I don't think they have to be an actual wolf or anything to get the job, the name just comes from the fact wolves are excellent literary critics (I actually don't really know why they use that word)
Author's responseHuh weird xP thank you for the offer. Ill get a friend for the job
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