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Turncoat
6 ReviewsOneshot. What if the task of killing Dumbledore in HBP fell not to Malfoy but to someone else? The last person you'd expect.
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(#) shawnpickett 2006-08-09 05:13:45 PM
Nice, though could I recomend a scene from Hermione's perspective as she's trapped under the ice? I like Hermione, she's one of my two favorite characters (Harry's my favorite honestly). But a story with a bit of a twist like this is too good. Great job, thank you. -
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(#) onaprilthird 2006-08-12 09:05:06 PM
amazing one shot. you should think of doing a sequel. A+ -
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(#) Anon 2006-08-31 12:29:05 AM
It's interesting, I don't especially like it but it definitely is well-written. One plot-hole/mistake that stood out to me was the talk of the prophecy. Voldemort marked Harry when he was an infant, there's no going back from that. He couldn't just change his mind and turn around and do Neville now. I think the more logical explanation would have been the wording of the prophecy being interpreted incorrectly or something along those lines.