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Turncoat

Oneshot. What if the task of killing Dumbledore in HBP fell not to Malfoy but to someone else? The last person you'd expect.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Dumbledore, Harry, Other - Warnings: [!!] [?] [V] - Published: 2006/08/08 - Updated: 2006/08/08 - 7476 words - Complete

Reviews

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  (#) shawnpickett 2006-08-09 05:13:45 PM

  Nice, though could I recomend a scene from Hermione's perspective as she's trapped under the ice? I like Hermione, she's one of my two favorite characters (Harry's my favorite honestly). But a story with a bit of a twist like this is too good. Great job, thank you.

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  (#) onaprilthird 2006-08-12 09:05:06 PM

  amazing one shot. you should think of doing a sequel. A+

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  (#) Anon 2006-08-31 12:29:05 AM

  It's interesting, I don't especially like it but it definitely is well-written. One plot-hole/mistake that stood out to me was the talk of the prophecy. Voldemort marked Harry when he was an infant, there's no going back from that. He couldn't just change his mind and turn around and do Neville now. I think the more logical explanation would have been the wording of the prophecy being interpreted incorrectly or something along those lines.

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  (#) Kain_boa 2006-10-27 01:39:44 PM

  great story, i really love to see these kinda different fics and i would love to see you continue this one, perhaps with harry plotting to take over the throne as the dark lord of britain

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  (#) Marie M 2007-06-04 03:36:01 AM

  It was great, I hope you'll cont it

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  (#) tricorvus 2011-09-15 02:04:00 AM

  This was fantastic. Wish it wasn't a one-shot. Then you could tell us what Harry did as a Death Eater. I mean, Voldy & Harry, both HALF-bloods, going on about purebloods taking over...

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