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Is it worth it? Can you even hear me? Standing with your spotlight on me Not enough to feed the hungry I'm tired and I felt it for awhile now

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: - Published: 2014-02-25 - 1716 words

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Malkavain

(#) lolhai 2014-02-25

I like it! I did notice a few wrong words, misspellings and some odd capitals, but its improved.
Author's response
Well actually according to European English there is not a thing wrong with it :)
Malkavain

(#) lolhai 2014-02-25

Mmmmm.... Cigar should not be capitalized and you put wondering instead of wandering.
Malkavain

(#) lolhai 2014-02-25

But its all minor stuff like that.
Malkavain

(#) Death_Herself 2014-02-25

You're welcome!

I really like this chapter. It was creepy (and I approve of creepy things).
Malkavain

(#) PansyAngel 2014-03-02

I must say I read the old story while it was up but I much prefer this one. There are a few spelling mistakes but only minor ones. Overall I really like the way it's going.
S xx
Malkavain

(#) ccander5 2020-11-09

I really like this you should write more