FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Categories > Anime/Manga > Card Captor Sakura

The One She Loves Best

Will Syaoran's return to Tomoeda affect the relationship between Sakura and Tomoyo?

Category: Card Captor Sakura - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters: Cerberus, Sakura, Tomoyo - Warnings: [!!!] - Published: 2006/08/08 - Updated: 2006/08/09 - 1249 words - Complete

Reviews

• The One She Loves Best

  (#) Dustbunny3 2006-10-29 02:03:32 PM

  Characterization was good overall, but Sakura's reaction was a bit flat, and the way Tomoyo finally spilled the beans felt off somehow. I'm also a bit confuzed that Kero sort of... disappeared at the end.
  
  Writing wasn't stellar, but not really BAD either. If anything, it was vacant, especially nearer the end. There was a touch of character insight in the beginning, but after that everyone seems to just be going through the motions. There were a couple of places where the discription felt awkward too.
  
  Overall, not a bad peice of writing, but a distance from noteworthy. Keep working, though, and I think you'll turn out some really good stuff

Filter