- Oh no! Vilashtri must not help kill Dracula! NOOOO!!! Phew.. Ok..
Very good so far. There are a few errors IE spelling and grammar. But perhaps you were just typing fast, yes? I like the idea of Vlad having a daughter, but I would truely like to see them interact a bit more. Oh! And I shall be forced to become quite cross with you if he is killed off.
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