HIATUS Dracula fooled Van Helsing with his mind tricks and suceeded in giving life to his children. But only one lived to see the night. Van Helsing and Carl are now, yet again, ordered to go back ...
- Oh no! Vilashtri must not help kill Dracula! NOOOO!!! Phew.. Ok..
Very good so far. There are a few errors IE spelling and grammar. But perhaps you were just typing fast, yes? I like the idea of Vlad having a daughter, but I would truely like to see them interact a bit more. Oh! And I shall be forced to become quite cross with you if he is killed off.