Ten years after the second war ended, harry finds his reason to go on.
- chuckle That's problem I well recognize from my own writing and why I try and get someone not at all involved with it to do a read-over and edit. It's an approach I learned "way back when" in college on papers (back when they were done on typewriters, not word processors ;) ) and it applies just as well to fanfic.
Author's responsei just finished my thesis, this past week i've jsut been throwing out chapters. and my beta is out of comission at the moment. when i get time i'll try to go back and fix many of the problems you pointed out. thanks.