Bruised and battered in this supernatural world, he had no idea where he was. Jack's story after you-know-what. -Oneshot-
(#) Pris 2006-08-13 10:44:24 AMThe blue sand can be his whores. -_-;;
No, joking. That was lovely! Really, it must be a hell to him without rum.
Author's responseXD Nice.
And... you know, now that I think about it, I never really thought about the whole 'no alcohol' deal. o.0 That's something to get my mind going for a few days.
Also, thanks for reviewing and I'm REALLY glad you liked the story. Me and my critical self keep thinking things like "No! You can't put that in there, that doesn't make any sense, this story's no good!" so it's really pleasing to hear that someone loves me. XDDD
(#) RavenSparrow 2006-08-15 02:17:14 AMI like this story! Tis' fantastico!
Write more cool stories please!!
Author's responseXD Thanks for the review. Something tells me I won't be working on any other stories for a while, though, unless they're like... random, humorous shorts about Jack. But I will be updating this one, so keep a lookout for some new chapters.
(#) PyroThagorean 2006-09-05 11:49:34 AMHmm, well, I'll say that I enjoyed it slightly. I'm just not one who enjoys reading a story without much dialogue, though in this case I didn't expect much of that to begin with. It's a good story, but I'll probably see better and I'll probably, make that definetly, see worse. It's interesting, but bland. If that makes any sense at all.
Author's responseIt does, and thanks for the words of wisdom. ^^ It's good to know that not everyone likes my writing, so for you review, you get an awesome cookie. XD And yeah, I do know what you mean by interesting but bland. I've read a few stories like that myself. Never thought I'd write one, but whatever. Thanks for your review!