Archie and Theresa get into yet another fight, but this time Theresa can't handle it. Even Jay and Atlanta's comfort won't be enough to solve this problem. What's going to happen to both of them no...
That was good! Remids me a bit of a couple of friendships I have (one really big fight connects us, and unlike those two we still fight like cats and dogs.) So it is very very good!
(#) Loretta 2006-08-14 05:50:30 PM
That was a really good story! I love your stories, they're really good to read and well writen!! Keep up the good work!!!
awsome story! The only thing you should change is make it longer. It was soo sweet and it ended way too soon. Keep up the awsome work ^-^
(#) fluffy pup 2006-08-14 06:50:53 PM
that was really really good i loved the ending it was so sweet and cute
(#) Jessi_Girl9 2006-08-14 08:10:29 PM
i love it, oh, and...
I LOVE MISS VICKIS SALT + WINEGAR CHIPS!!!
sorry, i had to add that, but great story, i loved it, it was awesome
thanks! hehe, i know who doesn't love those chips?
(#) RebornFireBird 2006-08-15 08:27:02 PM
Come on, only like 5 reviews so far? I personally loved it. not the part about Theresa not using her powers, but that would happen from a big fight like that. Bravo!
(#) Amanda!!! 2006-08-17 07:14:09 PM
that was awsome!!!i luved it!! just wondering... since this one wasn't much of a j/t can you make one that is!! please!!!
thanks! Actually I've already started working on a j/t one, but I've kind of got writer's block, so it might not be up for a bit, but it will be up soon!
(#) Theresa599 2006-11-17 03:56:01 PM
why a one-shot you should continu it i loved it
aw, thanks, lol. Dunno, I just think it's right to end it there... thanks again!