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Dawn's Reflection
1 ReviewsNatsuki takes a moment to reflect on an old memory while watching a sunset. One-shot, complete.
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Dawn's Reflection
(#) Catty Nebulart 2006-10-14 03:43:53 PM
It's nice, and good work overall but the second to last sentecne (The wind was only of average strength, that morning.) is a little akward and you might want to re-word it.