This was written for the TSS Contest #4 - Challenge #2 of Love Eater. Harry meets up with Severus five years after his graduation.. Slash, HPSS
- Very nice story.
A few problems though,
1. Nothing in my mind could ever picture Severus Snape in leather pants. It is simply not done.
2. You switched a few times betweed past and present tense, which is very confusing and akward to read.
3. The plot moved a bit quickly
Otherwise, very nice. I love the kissing of the tattoo and all that jazz.
Oh! and, I'm not sure what movie the quote is from, but in "Van Helsing" Mr. Hyde says, "Ah, Paris!"