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Silver into Grey, Blackness into Black

The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters: Bellatrix, Dumbledore, Harry, Hermione, Lupin, Neville, Sirius, Tom Riddle, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/08/31 - Updated: 2006/08/31 - 2987 words

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• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) JBern 2006-08-31 08:18:23 AM

  As always an enthralling chapter. I would have liked to see Greyback last a bit longer than he did in the fight, but that is a minor issue at best. Really enjoyed the blatent honesty when Lupin, Moody and Dumbles confront Harry about the murder. Very good job with the stark dialogue providing the atmosphere.

  Author's response

  It would have lasted longer if Greyback had known he was going up against an opponent with quicker reflexes than his own, but he had never had to face that problem before.
  
  "T"

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-08-31 11:23:00 AM

  Good chapter.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) Jimm 2006-08-31 11:27:48 AM

  Bellatrix & Voldemort's child... Now there's a disgusting idea. :-)
  
  This has been an interesting story so far. With this development, I can see that you're going to be diverging even farther afield.
  
  Thanks for sharing it with us.

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  (#) Shaggy37 2006-08-31 06:05:41 PM

  OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I will say this the mere thought of Moldieshorts having kids makes me wanna vomit but anyways I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next, do keep up the outstandingly awesome work and update soon please:):):):)

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  (#) kellypassion 2006-09-02 04:51:20 PM

  when the time comes are you going to show Hermione and Harry having sex

  Author's response

  Not in this story, no. I have (and will) in other stories.
  
  "T"

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  (#) Mr7 2006-09-04 06:22:58 PM

  Excellent work, as always. I admire the way you write the relationship between Harry and Hermione, it's beautiful. Great work with the dueling abilities, too. Keep up the good work. I hope you update soon.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) sadfru 2006-09-05 04:21:08 AM

  great chapter :)

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) brad 2006-09-05 05:15:10 AM

  So Harry's come out into the open about his personal vendetta against the DEs! Good for him!
  
  A child to Voldemort! I never saw that coming; that's a whole original twist to this retelling of canon. Another dark lord in the making?! THIS is something that complacent!future!Harry will never see coming!
  
  Plus you've got me nervous about Tom's 'very desperate plan to end Potter's charmed life'. Oh dear.

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2006-09-09 06:50:55 PM

  Good chapter.
  
  gunny

• Harry's Second Chance

  (#) saugart 2006-09-29 11:22:09 AM

  I found this chapter exciting. Thank you for writing.
  
  You write:
  
  Harry had easily last fifteen.
  
  You probably want:
  
  Harry had easily lasted fifteen.
  
  You write:
  until there's some crises
  
  You either want:
  until there's some crisis
  or:
  until there are some crises.

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