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Fic challenge: Write a story in five paragraphs.
- Great! All the elements are here for a good story. You build things nicely and then twist them wickedly at the end. Now, if you cut some words (not recommended) you would have a trebble; and if you added about 75, you would have a quadbble, which is very doable.
Thank you for sharing.