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Private Eye Sam

Fic challenge: Write a story in five paragraphs.

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2005/06/21 - Updated: 2005/06/22 - 317 words - Complete

Reviews

• Private Eye Sam

  (#) queasy 2005-06-22 06:43:53 AM

  Nice twist! =)

• Private Eye Sam

  (#) Ithilwen 2005-11-26 12:20:08 PM

  Hmm. I wouldn't call this a "story" in the traditional sense. It's more of a flashfic. Still, the twist at the end and all of the hinting... I guess he wasn't just the next guy to use the office. Heh heh heh!

• Private Eye Sam

  (#) Rous 2007-02-15 05:11:59 AM

  Great! All the elements are here for a good story. You build things nicely and then twist them wickedly at the end. Now, if you cut some words (not recommended) you would have a trebble; and if you added about 75, you would have a quadbble, which is very doable.
  
  Thank you for sharing.
  
  rous

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