Archie is trying to muster up enough courage to ask Atlanta out, even Jay and the rest of the guys try and help him out. AxA, one shot
That was something new but that's why I love love it!
(#) iheartyou07 2006-09-05 05:12:43 AM
aww, poor archie. i can see what atlanta meant... great job, can't wait for more stories!
(#) Someone. 2006-09-05 07:36:08 AM
I think you should make a proper story out of this idea. You could actually make more ups and downs between Atlanta and Archie. maybe that will attract more readers. Anyway good idea, I really loved it.
(#) Skittles 2006-09-05 05:20:03 PM
aww pooor archie
i loved it! it was so sad, i feel relly bad for Archie, but i think more for Atlanta because she didnt say yes, even though she wanted to. it was great.
(#) Jasmine_1 2006-09-19 04:16:17 PM
This is definitely a great story. If you continued it (No pressure though, sometimes it's frustrating to continue) you'd have many people addicted! I loove how it wasnt just Atlanta I LOVE YOU and Oh Archie I always imagined this would happen. Too bad the group dynamics messed up anyhow now...