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Here's your Knife

by Cards 2 Reviews

I introduced them. I didn't mean to have that happen

Category: Newsies - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst - Characters: David Jacobs - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2005/06/22 - Updated: 2005/06/23 - 172 words - Complete

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  • Here's your Knife

    (#) falco_conlon 2005-06-23 09:39:42 PM

    It's probably more morbid that it made me giggle...

    Ahh well...such is life. Interesting choice cards! I like the alternating lines and the sort of sociopath-like anger is definitely very clear. Nice job.
  • Here's your Knife

    (#) FredLyonsTheGreat 2010-08-12 06:56:02 PM

    I really don't know how to classify this story. It's really morbid, but in a way that's almost over the top. The premise of the story is really good, but I felt like David was really out of character. Overall, it was a good story with really well written dialouge, but it seemed rushed, and out of character.

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