Hello darkness...my friend I trust in your shadows I can hide It's only you I can trust in the end To kill the pain, I tried...
- I like the way you twisted fear around, as well as the way that darkness wasn't you embodiment of "evil". The end was a little cliche; I see too much poetry that ends in death. It's just over dramatic. But then, poetry is emotional and you dida good job of conveying that. Keep writing :)