Darkness' Shadows: Darkness Shadows :: FicWad: fresh-picked original and fan fiction

Hello darkness...my friend I trust in your shadows I can hide It's only you I can trust in the end To kill the pain, I tried...

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: - Published: 2006/09/06 - Updated: 2006/09/07 - 135 words - Complete

Darkness' Shadows

(#) Orual 2006-10-16 04:06:25 PM

I like the way you twisted fear around, as well as the way that darkness wasn't you embodiment of "evil". The end was a little cliche; I see too much poetry that ends in death. It's just over dramatic. But then, poetry is emotional and you dida good job of conveying that. Keep writing :)
Darkness' Shadows

(#) Smiley02 2007-10-12 08:12:22 PM

Darks I just love your poetry!

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