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Consequence
2 reviews[One-shot] She begged him not to do anything stupid, but he's always been a stubborn type of guy
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Consequence
(#) Jensti 2006-09-13
I'm liking it. Great immediate sense of pace and urgency in the first section. Back story is nice and short but shows and hides in just about the right measures. Really like the simplicity of Jounouchi's eventual reply to Anzu. Good stuff.Author's response
Urgency is what I was going for. I was actually really worried about the backstory and how it was wedged in, so I appreciate the feedback on that. Thanks for taking the time to write a thoughtful review. I'm glad you liked the storyConsequence
(#) darkokita 2008-05-24
I love the way the abject terror causes him to blow everything out of preportion. I'd be willing to bet that's very realistic.
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