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Friends In Need

by Roaming_Fool 3 Reviews

Ed is guided through the maze of twenty first century America by a well-meaning, if slightly sadistic, new friend. A crackfic in the "Balance of Power" universe.

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Humor - Characters: Edward Elric - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2006/09/09 - Updated: 2006/09/10 - 4433 words - Complete

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  • Friends In Need

    (#) Misk 2006-09-12 09:23:37 AM

    I really enjoyed this, especially since it's not the type of scenario I normally look for, in these stories. So that means it was very good, to hold my attention and be so enjoyable! As I mentioned to you elsewhere, I enjoy how consistently REAL your characters are. You describe their thoughts, movements, and dialogue so well that it's like watching real people. It never feels that the written word is intervening between the reader and the character. For the writing to be that transparent requires great skill indeed.

    Author's response

    Reviews like yours really do make my day. You have no idea how pleased I was that you were able to enjoy this story despite a senario that wouldn't normally appeal to you, AND that you took the time to tell me -what- it is about my writing that you liked.
  • Friends In Need

    (#) makani 2006-09-14 08:23:39 PM

    Ah, more lovely bits of Balance of Power. I love it. You've really got a firm hold of the characters motives and personalities--every word and gesture comes out naturally.
  • Friends In Need

    (#) Alice-San 2011-12-12 05:16:08 PM

    this story was the BEST I read so far on ficwad keep it up
    ~Alice Elric

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