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Chapter 2

by tara_li 1 Reviews

Kinsfire's story Family Matters ended, but perhaps there were some loose ends? After all, what other bonds might have been snapped by the BondSevering Curse? Sequel by permission of Kinsfire.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama - Characters: Arthur Weasley, Bill Weasley, Dobby, Dumbledore, Fred, George, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, Kingsley, Lupin, Ron, Sirius, Tonks, Voldemort - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/09/14 - Updated: 2006/09/15 - 4681 words

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  • Family Matters - Loose Ends

    (#) REALITYBENDER 2006-09-14 10:22:24 PM

    Excellent work so far. You have captured the spirit of the first story perfectly. I look forward to more

    Author's response

    Glad you're happy with how I've continued the story. I'm far from the writer that Kinsfire is, but I'm getting better. I think this is going to end up 8-10 chapters, but quite possibly more, because I'm only a quarter of the way through my notes - but at the same time, some parts of my notes are a lot more thorough than other parts. I've definitely learned a few lessons for the next time I write a story like this - main one being to plot out the minor characters in a bit more detail! Right now, Harry and Kingsley are almost the entire cast - despite initially pulling in a huge group in the first chapter.

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