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The eyes that lost their twinkle

by Ham 3 Reviews

Albus Dumbledore is a genius, the most powerful wizard in the world, the leader of the light, the one who everybody looks up to. He is also just a man, who sometimes needs to forget his mistakes......

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Dumbledore, Professor McGonagall - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/09/28 - Updated: 2006/09/28 - 1138 words - Complete

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  • The eyes that lost their twinkle

    (#) Shaggy37 2006-09-28 07:28:39 PM

    OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and I'm glad you finally wrote it, but I don't see it as drabble, I see it as a plot bunny you needed to exorcise. Anyways do keep up the amazingly awesome and outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
  • The eyes that lost their twinkle

    (#) whatareyouevensaying 2006-09-29 08:02:54 AM

    Excellent piece. This is the Dumbledore that I strive to write. Outstanding work.
  • The eyes that lost their twinkle

    (#) BenRG 2006-09-30 06:52:21 AM

    Of course, this is the big unanswered question of the HP story - Albus Dumbledore: manipulative or just naieve? Did he deliberately leave Harry in hell for 'the greater good' or was he just foolishly optimistic? You give one of the possible answers well in a good character piece that shows what happens when the mask of self-righteous virtue is torn from someone's face.

    Well written!

    BenRG's Rating: 8/10

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