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O For a Voice Like Thunder
2 ReviewsLuzzu and Gatta, and Spira. [yaoi warnings]
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O For a Voice Like Thunder
(#) Rikku142 2005-06-17 02:39:57 AM
Wow. There are a few slight grammtical errors, but on the whole this was very well written.
This has to be the most moving story I have ever read in fanfiction. There's not much than can move me to almost tears.
I like your characterisation of Luzzu and Gatta. They are portrayed in a very believable manner. Kudos. -
O For a Voice Like Thunder
(#) Luna_Tiger 2005-07-01 04:49:00 PM
The reporting of death is probably sadder than the actuality of it. I can't stop crying, damn you.
The lack of capitals in various places threw me off a lot, and I can't tell if that was the intention or just...not caught. So...right.