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A Horrible Halloween Party

A girl's life is as horrible as horrible gets. What happens when she meets a gentleman vampire and is invited to his home?

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama, Fantasy, Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2006/09/16 - Updated: 2006/09/16 - 1350 words

Reviews

• Vampyre's Heart

  (#) CodeWordLove 2006-09-17 03:14:43 PM

  I really like this story please keep it going

• Vampyre's Heart

  (#) herk444 2006-09-27 06:02:17 AM

  I liked it, like, how she had no idea what "OMG" mean't. But it just seemed a bit unlikely that a vampire would declare himself so openly...I dunno. Just struck me.
  
  Love the descriptions... If you had time, do you think you rcould read my story? It does deal with vampires.
  
  --love--
  herkie

• Vampyre's Heart

  (#) Adaku-chan 2006-10-14 02:52:18 PM

  Hey, this is good---but what you should do is spearate the paragraph and the dialouge so it won't be so confusing. Other than that, great work. Till next time

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