Theresa had her phycis abilities and the rest of the gang have thier speacial powers but when one bad girl with even more powerful mystic powers things go out of control what will happen to the Ti...
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Your fic was kinda hard for me to read. I think it's mostly because all of the text is kinda smashed together. It'd look better if you made a new paragraph each time someone new spoke. Just makes it easier on the eyes. Also, looks like you missed a few names and words that need to be capitalized.